Told.

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This guy is still coming at you.

The story is told. The Scout’s Journey plot is fully developed. The synopsis is 13 pages.

The full script, including dialogue and gameplay and audio logs, is near 200 (compare 120 pages for a typical film script), but the final bricks that fell into place during writing the synopsis still need to be put in. The game has no more than 12 audio logs, but they are slightly longer than usual. The beginning was recently rewritten again to let the player have control of Scout in under five minutes (now stop nagging, John Walker). Cutscenes will be skippable after watching once.

Pending new feedback or ultra-amazing ideas, this is a major milestone.

This part of the game really is back-breaking work. I’m finished.

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Up Against

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Quick two-player duel map, “Up Against”, for Command & Conquer 3 Kane’s Wrath.  Download available from ModDB.

Took about three days to make. It’s very fun for me to learn new tools of game making, including historical ones, so I do these little one-offs sometimes. Last time it was Torchlight, I believe, but I got bored with that before I could finish the map. Kane’s Wrath still has a player base, so perhaps this ends up in a map pack or something. That would be cool.

Got any suggestions as to what else I should try?


Level designer popcorn

Rejoice, children of Nod! Small excursion into level design for an RTS game, in this case Command and Conquer 3: Tiberium Wars / Kane’s Wrath. An old game by now, but still has a few tricks up its sleeve such as the rather gorgeous volumetric light ray effect that lends the game world a feeling of depth and mystery. Stock maps often go for a greenish fog to portray the game’s creeping Tiberium infestation, but I chose a blood red hue which I think goes well with the desert textures.

Here’s without post processing. See the difference. My eyes! It just blends a lot better on the high settings, doesn’t it.

I’m just practicing detailing, checking out the wealth of assets and having some fun. I’ll file it under art practice. *cough* The game is well worth checking out, the level editor “Worldbuilder” is freely available. Nice textures, fully 3D, realtime lighting and post processing options, what’s not to like? Makes for an excellent toy.


Good progress recently

After weeks of bottling up various ideas and feeling blocked or uninspired, I got down to work again. My massive editing and rewriting pass had stopped at the end of Chapter 3 of Scout’s Journey, half a year ago, and the next two chapters were a mess of stuff in my head, especially Chapter 5. I knew where I wanted to go with it all, but couldn’t put it in a mental order that I could have written down. And I had gotten some feedback that challenged me to make my characters more distinctive. So I kinda started very loosely rewriting a scene in Chapter 1 where my two protagonists (Scout herself and the main impact character) have their first one-on-one. This was a place where I could lay on some more character. I carried that around for a couple days, then got down to sorting it out and editing it down. It was OK. I was actually working again.

Next thing, I had one of those moments where you wake up with a completely new scene in your head that goes in the place of an old one. But this was so much better. It was the part of the game where Scout is introduced. At first this new scene appeared very unlike everything else, except Scout was fully characterized in two and a half pages and like 10 lines of dialogue. It was too good to be true. Sometimes inspiration strikes out of the blue and gives you a huge puzzle piece that you were only dimly aware you needed. But boy, this does a heck of a lot to kickstart Scout’s entire character. And it really drives everything that happens in Chapter 1.

Around the same time, I had another idea that kinda pulls in an important stringer in a layer of the game that has to do with Scout’s ability to connect with a character who becomes a major ally. The key here was that Scout can do something that otherwise, only children can. It’s like she has access to a part of her mind that allows her to do pretty unique things. This was very easy to integrate, it required rewriting a couple lines only, but at the same time it was like putting an additional steel I-beam into a building that really reinforces the entire thing. Afterwards I didn’t understand how I could have missed that –  everything I had previously written was so close to the right place but the spark just didn’t connect. Well, it’s done now.

Then, Chapter 4 started to assemble itself into something that made a lot of sense. Chapter 4 is very focused on Scout and her exploration, stealth and combat abilities. Real first person action stuff, with not a lot of story interference and almost a feel of loneliness to it. This makes for a nice contrast with Chapter 3, which is unusually story heavy with several factions and a dozen characters colliding like a car crash among a lot of scripted stuff. So I really started to lose my doubts about the chapter sequence – giving the player all that freedom and even having an extended FPS sequence at the end of Chapter 4 is a good thing at that point in the game. The player is going to be like, “let me play!” after Chapter 3, and this should just deliver nicely.

But I only sketched it out for now, I’m gonna do the actual rewrite later, because I got real busy with Chapter 7, which is to say, the endgame. I got it to the point where the end kinda mirrors the beginning, which was one of the criticisms I had gotten – that the end didn’t work. Well, it does now.

I got Chapter 5 buzzing around my head – it’s another exploration heavy thing with a main storyline quest that spans the entire game world – but I haven’t done much rewriting yet. I wrote a new chapter ending because a main thing needed to be foreshadowed for the new ending. I guess I’ll just splatter it all over the page and then clean it up some time from now. I decided against Scout having a romance option in there though, it’s just not that kind of game. Otherwise it’s currently like a ball of yarn needing to be unravelled.

Anyway, that’s the progress report. It’s not like I’m doing nothing. I’m surprised that the middle chapters are such a bitch to get right, but I’m closing in on them. I’ve got Chapters 1-3 and 7 largely done and major inroads into 4, 5 and 6.

Phew.

 

 

 

 

 


Well worth watching

Music producer and composer Rick Beato sounds off with game composer and programmer Brian Schmidt.

From 1999-2008, Schmidt was the program manager of the Xbox Audio and Voice Technologies division at Microsoft and was responsible for much of the audio architecture for the Xbox and Xbox 360. He created the start up sound for the original Xbox console, using ‘old-school’ techniques to create an 8-second sound using only 25 kilobytes of memory. (Wikipedia)

We learn about the history of the craft and working on game audio using tools such as FMOD. Highly recommended if you’re doing audio for video games. Rick Beato’s entire channel is very good for people interested in music.


Looking at it like this

Here’s a blurb I wrote for a writing discussion elsewhere to describe the way I handle the “chosen one” trope in Scout’s Journey, but I thought better of it and posted it here for your amusement and to jog my memory. Because I found this the first pretty apt description of it that I wrote. It almost gives me a new perspective.

“She is brought in unaware by forces outside her control, who intend her to be a sacrifice to a Big Bad. The player learns this before she does. Along the way, it turns out that she does have a skill, making friends with people who looked like certain enemies, thus kicking off a conflict in the enemy faction which ends up helping her. Through sheer curiosity, she makes contact with someone who is equally lost, and who turns out to be Big Bad’s nemesis. She only learns this through open-mindedness and careful listening. The prophecy comes in the form of a children’s story. This nemesis has to be freed from an age of imprisonment; as for what she ends up having to do, she only understands right when Big Bad gets his paws on her.”

In other news, I got the flu, and it sucks. I forgot how much it sucks.

Take care guys, and whack a nazi for me when you see one. Seriously, what’s going on with the world?

 

 


No “Mary Sue”

After learning what people mean by “Mary Sue”, I took this test for Scout, my protagonist, and scored extremely low (4 points; 16 before applying “de-suifiers”).

Yes, she figures in an otherworldly prophecy. But hey, she’s a protagonist. I guess she’s solid.

In other words, yes, the writing slavery goes on.